The Battle of Bunker Hill Oliver Branch Petition
Under the harsh rule of the British, colonists in America decided to express their discontent at the First Continental Congress by fighting against their mother country. The colonists raised troops with soldiers called minutemen and stockpiled weapons. When Britain heard about these events, British General Thomas Gage decided to seize illegal weapons in Concord, Massachusetts in the spring of 1775. Some colonists like Paul Revere warned the arrival of the king’s troops by using subtle signals such as church bells.
The first battle of Revolutionary War finally broke out after 70 minutemen refused king’s troop’s demand to lay down their arms and ran away, which resulted in eight minutemen killed. However, the British soldiers did not realize that thousands of minutemen were waiting for them in Concord where they were returning to Boston. The minutemen successfully killed some British soldiers and the British soldiers retreated with humiliation.
After the incident in Concord, colonial leaders argued among themselves at the Second Continental Congress in Philadelphia over the actions they would take. Some advocated for complete independence from Britain; while others wanted to recover the broken relationship. In the end, they decided to appoint George Washington as the commander of the newly recognized Continental Army, which was formerly the colonial militia.
On June, 1775, British general Thomas Gage led a group of 2,400 men to Breed’s Hill, which was near Bunker Hill, to attack the militiamen. The militiamen on the hill fought at the last minute against the soldiers and finally retreated. In the Battle of Bunker Hill, 450 militiamen had died and Britain had 1,000 casualties. Although the colonies were preparing for a potential war, many delegates at the Second Continental Congress were loyalists to their mother country who hoped for peace. They sent an Olive Branch Petition in July to ask for the revival of past harmony between the colonies and Britain. However, a Revolution War was inevitable when George III rejected the petition and issued a proclamation to urge the Parliament to blockade the American coast reasoning that the colonies were in a state of rebellion.
Written by Alvin
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