Tuesday, March 9, 2010

The Race in Space


On July 20th, 1969, Niel Armstrong would take the first steps onto the moon. This was a monumental achievement, not only for the United States, but for humanity has a whole. Finally, we had reached our goal of interplanetary exploration, and although the moon is just one small step of many, it is a launching point for exploration in space.
These few steps on the moon were the result of more than seven years of diligent work. The whole situation began with the Soviet cosmonaut Yuri A. Gagarin, the first human in space. For years, Soviet Russia had been working on sending a man into space, and finally achieved this goal on April 12, 1961. Frightened by the possibility of the Soviets gaining an edge on us, President Kennedy vowed that America would be the first country with a man on the moon. In less than a month, the US also had a man travel into space. Following the creation of the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA), the United States dedicated a lot of time and money in reaching its goal of having a man skip around on the moon. It would be more than seven years until this goal would be accomplished.
The impact of this historic event can still be felt today in our technology and in our schools. Most of our wireless technology stems from the use of satellites and super-orbital spacecraft, and there is endless possibility for technological and economic expansion among the stars. Also, following the massive federal funding for research and space development, many schools and universities expanded their science curriculum immensely. The steps of one man are followed by years of international cooperation, the growth of business and renewed excitement in the sciences in the schools of America.

-Holt Bowmer

13 comments:

  1. Nicely done. Complete, and tells us the effects of the mission- not just that it was a landmark in of itself

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  2. Very informative, but I think that splitting the text up into smaller paragraphs would make it easier to read.

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  3. I really likd your post and the photo was a good way to make it mor interesting, but I think if you would have divided the text into paragraphs, it would have been easier to read.

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  5. Your posting contains detailed fact and important information about the space race between U.S. and Soviet Union. I really like your picture about Neil Armstrong on the moon.

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  6. The post is neat. Easy to read good job holt

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  7. Nice job. it was very informative, and it had all of the main points about the race in space. I like how you connected the space race to modern days, and how it was able to help us even today.

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  8. Very informative and well written. It was kind of hard to read because everything was put into one mega paragraph.

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  9. I think your posting was very well done and informational. The picture made it a little more interesting. Maybe you could have given a little more background information on the US and Russia's relationship.

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  10. You spelled Neil wrong :P

    but otherwise good job, and nice graphic

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  11. nice job, you had a lot of nice information

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  12. Nice and informative. lots of good information i like your picture.

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  13. i liked how the piece was short but informative. good picture!

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